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([personal profile] robling_t Oct. 20th, 2014 04:37 pm)
The good news is, Muse has submitted what appears to be the opening line of the new story idea.

The bad news is, it's in second-person.

While this actually does happen to resolve certain difficulties the idea presents for telling this particular story in either first or third, I wasn't really expecting to have to go read Bright Lights, Big City as part of the research for this...